Off-Worlder Application Format/Thread

I'm still getting used to the lore so I'm sorry if the RP Example is a little weird or something else, this is also my first time on a Forum RP instead of on a Server and this is the very first time I ever made an application that's not with a Fallout Lore.

Character Name: Catar'lin Re'le

Character Description or Link to Sheet:
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Glowing Gold
Sex: Female
Height: 7'
Weights: 155lbs
Age: 20 (40 Human Years)
Planet of Birth: Tarkonia

Character Back-story:

Catar'lin Re'le was born in 2712, 1 year (2 Human Years) after the year where the moon smiles. She's been thaught the ways how the Tarken Elves lived before the year where the moon smiles by her parents and she always prays at Re'pre. At the age of 5 (10 Human Years) her parents started to tell her about the year where the moon smiles and the radio active wasteland. When she reached the age of 18 (36 Human Years) she went to see how the radio active wasteland looks like, ofcourse she did not get too close. She's now 20 (40 Human Years) and she's quite neutral towards everyone from nature but also arrogant and can be rude towards strangers. She now awaits what her Fel'Lol brings her to.

RP Example for Passive Role-play, to be 20 Self-Responses or more at an indeterminate amount of length and detail, whereas skill will be gauged based upon effort.

Passive Role-Play:

Catar'lin Re'le wakes up at 6 AM (3 AM Human Time), going out of bed and washing herself a bit before putting on a dark blue shirt with a black blouse over it then she puts on black pants and black boots.
Catar'lin Re'le walks downstairs, grabbing only a little bit of food.
Her parents look at her and they say "Al'Qar belore noran Quroe, Catar'lin." (English: I beg the Sun to watch over you and bring you peace, Catar'lin.)
Catar'lin Rel'le smiles slightly, saying "Al'Qar belore noran Quroe, Pare e Para." (English: I beg the Sun to watch over you and bring you peace, Mom and Dad.)
Catar'lin Rel'le looks at her parents, saying "Anyone want something to drink?"
Her dad says "No, thank you." and her mom says "Yes, please."
Catar'lin Rel'le says "What do you want to drink?" as she grabs two glasses.
Her mom says "Paral, please." (Paral is a red type of beer.)
Catar'lin Rel'le smiles "Alright." She pours two glasses with Paral, pouring a little beside it by accident, mumbling "Fuck..."
Her mom hears it slightly, saying "Excuse me, Catar'lin?"
Catar'lin Rel'le says "Nothing, Pare!" as she cleans it up, she walks to the couch with the two glasses after she's finished with cleaning, putting them on the table and going to sit down.
Her mom looks at her, saying "Thank you, Catar'lin."
Catar'lin Rel'le nods, saying "No problem, Pare. I'm heading out soon if you don't mind. Taking a walk with a friend."
Her mom says "Who?" Going to sip from her Paral.
Catar'lin Rel'le sighs a bit "With Kirthe ofcourse." She begins to drink her Paral.
Her mom nods a bit, saying "Alright. Just make sure that you're back before Re'pre."
Catar'lin Rel'le smiles "Always, Pare." She finishes her Paral.
Her friend, Kirthe knocks on the door.
Catar'lin Rel'le smiles a bit, walking to the door and going to open it.
Kirthe says "Al'Qar belore noran Quroe, Catar'lin."
Catar'lin Rel'le says "Al'Qar belore noran Quroe, Kirthe." back as she closes the door behind her, walking outside.
It's about 7 AM (3.30 AM Human Time) now.
Catar'lin Rel'le takes a walk together with Kirthe, saying "How have you been lately, Kirthe?"
Kirthe says "I'm doing quite good. What about you?"
Catar'lin Rel'le shrugs a bit, saying "I've been thinking... About leaving Tarkonia and see the other planets... Like Earth maybe."
Kirthe frowns, saying "What!? You're leaving me?"
Catar'lin Rel'le chuckles, saying "I'm not sure yet and it won't be any time soon so no need to worry already." She looks at the time, saying "Well... I have to go otherwise I won't make it back before Re'pre."
Kirthe nods, saying "Alright. See you later." She walks off.
Catar'lin Rel'le goes home, opening the door and walking in, saying "I'm back for Re'pre, Pare e Para."
Her parents say "Welcome back, Catar'lin." Her mom says "Have you washed yourself yet, Catar'lin?"
Catar'lin Rel'le nods, saying "Yes, Pare. I have."
Her mom smiles, saying "Alright. It's almost 10 AM (5 AM Human Time) so get ready."
Catar'lin Rel'le walks upstairs into her room, making sure she looks good for Re'pre, she fixes her hair since it's a little bit messy.
Some minutes pass by.
Her mom comes upstairs, opening her door, saying "Are you coming, Catar'lin? It's time."
Catar'lin Rel'le looks up, saying "Yes, Pare." She turns off the light in her room, closing the door and walking downstairs with her mom.
Her mom and dad sit down on the floor, towards the sunrise, waiting for her.
Catar'lin Rel'le sits down on the floor towards the sunrise too, waiting for the last minute till 10 AM (5 AM Human Time).
It's exactly 10 AM (5 AM Human Time) now.
Her parents begin praying.
Catar'lin Rel'le begins to pray too.